Narrative Writing In Room 10

Room 10 are Learning To Write A Narrative......

Here Is A Piece of Writing.......

They tried and tried but the batteries were dead. Now how would they contact their parents. Jill flicked her long blonde hair out of her face,and told a sensational idea. As she announced it the green rainforest roared and started to cry water.

Billy expressed very loudly to everyone that he saw a yellow and orange tiger from a long distance view. When Billy pointed out to everyone the yellow and orange tiger,everyone screamed with terror.

Jackie was petrified but out of the corner of her eye she saw a sharp and shiney spear. Billy was curious about what Jackie was looking at. Jackie whizzed over to the spear and picked it up. The tiger kept on getting closer with hunger wanting the tasty human bodies. The hungry starved tiger sprung out. 

Jackie remembered the spear in her hand and as powerfully as possible she threw the spear. The spear squished through the bloody and squishy insides of the yellow and orange tiger. Jill and Billy all screaned with amazement.

On the inside they were really thanking Jackie and wondering how she did that. She was so brave. The green rainforest stopped crying and magically spread the blossom and green nature tree's apart.

Billy sprinted over,and saw the light that had shone like the sun,then the other two followed. The three of them got over to the other side,and as they stood there they saw the road.

After all the three of them didn't need any batteries because guess who drove past...........their Mum and Dad.

{ Still to be proof read by Mrs Bunny }